Baby Bees

May 27

By : Brittany McFarland

Can I go play?
There are bees.
They gone.
Where did they go, Colin?
They went up to play with baby Jesus.

There is my dad's old shop, Colin.
Where your daddy Bittny?
Thinking. . . Searching for words. . .
He went with the bees to see baby Jesus.








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6 comments:

Britknee Mac said...
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cc124905 said...

Very beautiful.

Britknee Mac said...

Thank you :)

cc124905 said...

You are welcome.

hepcat1of1 said...

ohhh, bittny.... too cute.
:)

OliP said...

Britt,wow, I wish I would have read this sooner. Totally not what I thought it was going to be and it's amazing how you're saying so much with just those few lines. Very creative!

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